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‘How to save a life’
Nations beg into the bookstore,
scouring shelves; hearts convulsing
to disjointed rhythms of urgency.
‘How to save a life’ is sold out vacant,
signalling the cue for ragged keens
which resonate off the walls.
I can hear time slipping down
the clock, escaped savage;
systematic order readily
discarded someplace forgotten.
Memory Lane struggles underneath
the weeds that pin her down hopeless,
whilst Melancholy Avenue prides
itself in being endlessly
popular with the locals.
Sitting vertical on the visitors chair,
imagination cruelly takes his tole;
whilst electricity vibrates my spinal chord,
high pitched worry playing the blues
to my nervous system.
Welling tears answer the question,
how can I save his life?
"You can't".
scouring shelves; hearts convulsing
to disjointed rhythms of urgency.
‘How to save a life’ is sold out vacant,
signalling the cue for ragged keens
which resonate off the walls.
I can hear time slipping down
the clock, escaped savage;
systematic order readily
discarded someplace forgotten.
Memory Lane struggles underneath
the weeds that pin her down hopeless,
whilst Melancholy Avenue prides
itself in being endlessly
popular with the locals.
Sitting vertical on the visitors chair,
imagination cruelly takes his tole;
whilst electricity vibrates my spinal chord,
high pitched worry playing the blues
to my nervous system.
Welling tears answer the question,
how can I save his life?
"You can't".
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Re: ‘How to save a life’
Anonymous
16th Feb 2013 10:29am
Well penned, & descriptive, Scribbler. I like the second stanza, in particular & this:
whilst electricity vibrates my spinal chord,
high pitched worry playing the blues
to my nervous system.
Very nice finish to this excellent piece! Enjoyed! :)
Carlene
whilst electricity vibrates my spinal chord,
high pitched worry playing the blues
to my nervous system.
Very nice finish to this excellent piece! Enjoyed! :)
Carlene

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re: Re: ‘How to save a life’
16th Feb 2013 11:06am
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:45am
16th Feb 2013 11:25am
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16th Feb 2013 11:59am
Re: ‘How to save a life’
16th Feb 2013 4:58pm
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Re: ‘How to save a life’
Anonymous
16th Feb 2013 7:58pm
Fascinating write, Scribbler, the end totally surprised me....

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Re: ‘How to save a life’
Anonymous
26th Feb 2013 5:31am
Ooh this is Great! Vivid picture you painted:)

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re: Re: ‘How to save a life’
26th Feb 2013 5:50am
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2025 10:45pm
11th Mar 2013 11:12pm
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Re: ‘How to save a life’
Anonymous
12th Apr 2013 5:12pm
I'm sorry but the message I got was you missed out on a book about saving lives and then you saw a blues player who is going downhill.... a metaphor I missed or didn't understand. Please teach me

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re: Re: ‘How to save a life’
12th Apr 2013 5:35pm
Rule it off as an insane rambling;
I'm going over it and I have no idea
what i'm going on about :)
I'm going over it and I have no idea
what i'm going on about :)
re: re: Re: ‘How to save a life’
Anonymous
12th Apr 2013 5:55pm
Really???? This poem is interesting if I new.
I'm a novice....so I'm learning....sloooooowwwly....
Your awesome!!!
I'm a novice....so I'm learning....sloooooowwwly....
Your awesome!!!

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