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Hatred
i dream of you slumped over
all broken up sitting in
your own expanding red circle.
the red you could almost
call black.
in my dream i kneel down
beside you and start to
fill my hip flask
quickly from this congealing
mess,this puddle of life.
sighs of manifest
just the droning of that voice
makes venom build inside
my mouth,i can taste it.
i want to offer it to you
sink my teeth slowly into
your cheek,taking a deep
pleasure in watching
them innocent eyes flair.
mark my words one day
these hands of mine will
end you,will pound a rich
mince of flesh and bone.
all broken up sitting in
your own expanding red circle.
the red you could almost
call black.
in my dream i kneel down
beside you and start to
fill my hip flask
quickly from this congealing
mess,this puddle of life.
sighs of manifest
just the droning of that voice
makes venom build inside
my mouth,i can taste it.
i want to offer it to you
sink my teeth slowly into
your cheek,taking a deep
pleasure in watching
them innocent eyes flair.
mark my words one day
these hands of mine will
end you,will pound a rich
mince of flesh and bone.
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Re: Hatred
15th Feb 2013 8:49pm
I'd like to think they wouldn't end anyone but ok I get it. You're upset.
Seriously very good poem. I felt the anger which is good.
It's nibble not bite.. (Lol Jk)
Seriously very good poem. I felt the anger which is good.
It's nibble not bite.. (Lol Jk)
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re: Re: Hatred
16th Feb 2013 2:57am
Re: Hatred
16th Feb 2013 00:44am
Great is the writer whose words can make you feel his/her emotions. I felt your 'Hatred'!
Sublime Ink!:) xo
Sublime Ink!:) xo
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re: Re: Hatred
16th Feb 2013 3:17am
this is my poem
kills me to hurt anyone else
but its my truth
so glad you enjoyed sean
kills me to hurt anyone else
but its my truth
so glad you enjoyed sean
Re: Hatred
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16th Feb 2013 3:53am
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re: Re: Hatred
16th Feb 2013 8:40am
yes yes Broomie,hope all is well,the leo must be the lion in me,hugs and kisses back,thank you sean
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14th Mar 2013 8:04pm
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16th Feb 2013 5:00pm
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Re: Hatred
17th Feb 2013 6:33pm
Better not to carry it all around in your head, bubbling, boiling, seething, festering. Good to breathe out - your truth, that is. Better now, I bet. :-)
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17th Feb 2013 7:22pm
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8th Mar 2013 11:09pm
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11th Mar 2013 10:14pm
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Re: Hatred
5th Apr 2013 5:40pm
Very powerful words and images.
I feel strong emotion behind them.
Sorry, I find it hard to convey why I like poems in these comments. But it is good writing.
:)
I feel strong emotion behind them.
Sorry, I find it hard to convey why I like poems in these comments. But it is good writing.
:)
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