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My sweet Valentine
my sweet valentine
will you always be mine
in sickness and health
through poverty and wealth
and all of life's situations
including hardships and tribulations
just know despite everything keeping us apart
you're the one who still has my heart
together lets face our problems and fears
with love lust laughter compassion and tears
cause our love and passionate embrace
will never be just a fleeting phase
and when our lips meet for a luscious kiss
it's always the most wonderful bliss
so to my sweetheart and valentine
I say I'm yours and ask
if you'll always be mine
will you always be mine
in sickness and health
through poverty and wealth
and all of life's situations
including hardships and tribulations
just know despite everything keeping us apart
you're the one who still has my heart
together lets face our problems and fears
with love lust laughter compassion and tears
cause our love and passionate embrace
will never be just a fleeting phase
and when our lips meet for a luscious kiss
it's always the most wonderful bliss
so to my sweetheart and valentine
I say I'm yours and ask
if you'll always be mine
Published 15th Feb 2013
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Right on, well written my Friend, Only LOVE, can cause such feelings like these. Poverty and wealth, sickness an health, and Especialy the hardships and tribulations. More that hate, Love commands more feeling an emotion, an is also stronger an the harder road to keep an go down.
Thank you appreciating my poem. Love should not be taken for granted, and is the most special feeling in the world. It can be the glue that keeps people together when the going gets tough. Ideally anyways. :)
Anonymous
8th Mar 2013 7:22am
Oh what a romantic piece this is. Full of pure love and want. Love it! :)
8th Mar 2013 4:47pm
24th Apr 2013 11:45am
Totally reminds me of first hearing "My Funny Valentine". Many have taken a shot at it, but the versions I grew up on were by the incomparable Ella Fitzgerald and Sarah Vaughan.
A very nice memory---thanks!
A very nice memory---thanks!
24th Apr 2013 4:04pm
It makes me happy to evoke such a nice memory for you......
It's a heartfelt poem and I still mean every word of it.......
Thanks for commenting. :)
It's a heartfelt poem and I still mean every word of it.......
Thanks for commenting. :)
7th Oct 2013 6:57pm
7th Oct 2013 10:11pm
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14th Dec 2013 2:36pm
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16th Dec 2013 9:27pm
Thank for your sweet comment -- I feel honored that u enjoyed this so much -- I really like this poem as I consider it to be one of my better ones.... btw I still feel the same way about the person it was written for....... :)
