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BIRD
I am a bird traped in a cage of steel and chains.
my wings have been cut and are always dripping blood.
I always stair at the moon wishing for my doom.
I can not fly and i can not sing.
if you one day find this bird in a cage.
all you will see i a bird with bloody wings. and the only song you will hear is my sorrowful tears falling to the floor as i stair at the moon wishing for my doom......
my wings have been cut and are always dripping blood.
I always stair at the moon wishing for my doom.
I can not fly and i can not sing.
if you one day find this bird in a cage.
all you will see i a bird with bloody wings. and the only song you will hear is my sorrowful tears falling to the floor as i stair at the moon wishing for my doom......
Published 10th Feb 2013
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10th Feb 2013 9:34pm
Nice idea for this poem,
** 'i' to 'I'
** 'stair' to 'stare'
I liked how you incorporated morose
'no escape' feelings into this.
Keep at it,
Scribbler.
** 'i' to 'I'
** 'stair' to 'stare'
I liked how you incorporated morose
'no escape' feelings into this.
Keep at it,
Scribbler.
10th Feb 2013 11:58pm
i liked your take on this poem i too feel like this bird in this write i can relate to this
11th Feb 2013 1:40am
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11th Feb 2013 10:47am
thank you all so much and i am sorry for the miss spelling but i am realy happy that you all like it :)
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