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the night you told me you love me [ dedicated heidi ]
The night you told me you love me
I cried in your words and replid
Said I love you to,we knew were meant
To be but could our love be to soon,
Though it feels so right in natural
What can seprate us besides death if
Earth decides to split us by one
I'll sreach for you till my body gives up
And grasp for breath, but when we
Finally reunite ima ask you to marry
Me an to promise never leave my sight
The night you told me you love me is
When I fought the love of my life.
I cried in your words and replid
Said I love you to,we knew were meant
To be but could our love be to soon,
Though it feels so right in natural
What can seprate us besides death if
Earth decides to split us by one
I'll sreach for you till my body gives up
And grasp for breath, but when we
Finally reunite ima ask you to marry
Me an to promise never leave my sight
The night you told me you love me is
When I fought the love of my life.
Published 25th Aug 2010
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25th Aug 2010 8:58am
Anonymous
25th Aug 2010 8:59am
i enoyed the tale itself but the simple things need a little attention like punctuation and word choice meerley to allow this to flow as intended.
25th Aug 2010 10:22am
This poem is nice, but really needed a grammar and spell check, or someone to look it over for you...
