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WHY?
Why do you hit me?
Do you enjoy my pain you see in my eyes?
Why do treat me like im worthless?
Do you like the tears that come from my eyes?
All i ever wanted was to be love by you
but all you do is hurt me
tell me is love really true
Do you enjoy my pain you see in my eyes?
Why do treat me like im worthless?
Do you like the tears that come from my eyes?
All i ever wanted was to be love by you
but all you do is hurt me
tell me is love really true
Published 25th Aug 2010
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25th Aug 2010 5:00pm
i think you got the right idea you just need to put it in poetry form. i know a poem could even be like a letter but you need more than just the basics you need structure and more details and try other subjects.
