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Re: Haiku I
Anonymous
5th Feb 2013 8:28pm
Chiyo, this is a lovely haiku... beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed the read! :)
Carlene
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re: Re: Haiku I
5th Feb 2013 8:50pm
Thank you very much, Carlene! I appreaciate your comment! It came into my mind in Namibia ... to which I lost my heart.
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Anonymous
5th Feb 2013 11:18pm
Chiyo, I love your words about Namibia. Perhaps there is a poem, in there!! :)
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18th Jul 2013 00:01am
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18th Jul 2013 00:00am
Thank you! I did it in Namibia where the stars seem to be entirely different from those we know from here. The sky was so faszinating so I got up in the morning hours and penned the Haiku. Had to ...
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18th Jul 2013 8:00am
Yes, you're so right. Haha! And sometimes you have to but you can't. That's frustrating!
Re: Haiku I
Anonymous
2nd Dec 2013 9:32pm
very Lovely Iris! and very fitting! :)
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2nd Dec 2013 9:34pm