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Love me, not my dick
Every girl ive ever met has loved my big hard cock
Nine full inches, thank you lord, and it stands up like a rock
but is this hunk of meat thats in my pants a blessing or a tradgedy?
because i cant distinguish whether it is him or me whos majesty.
They always say they love me, but all we do is fuck
our conversations meaningless, i guess its just my luck
or a creation of my own design, see your looks are pretty, sexy, rare
But your shallow as a puddle and as useless as a spare
So let me ride you 50 miles and change this tire quick
Because there is a new dumb whore who needs this big hard dick
Nine full inches, thank you lord, and it stands up like a rock
but is this hunk of meat thats in my pants a blessing or a tradgedy?
because i cant distinguish whether it is him or me whos majesty.
They always say they love me, but all we do is fuck
our conversations meaningless, i guess its just my luck
or a creation of my own design, see your looks are pretty, sexy, rare
But your shallow as a puddle and as useless as a spare
So let me ride you 50 miles and change this tire quick
Because there is a new dumb whore who needs this big hard dick
Published 29th Jan 2013
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29th Jan 2013 6:41pm
I dont generally read stuff like this but it did make me giggle. well done:)
29th Jan 2013 6:46pm
thanks, ya i was thinking short and sweet without too much detail. im not generally an erotic writer either so i just tried to add a little humor.
hmmm....you asked a question; "but is this hunk of meat thats in my pants a blessing or a tradgedy?" Then you later answered your own question with; "Because there is a new dumb whore who needs this big hard dick"
So, dumb whores who loves the hunk of meat in your pants, who seemed to be shallow with meaningless conversation and are useless as a spare.....more likely than not, are interested in your dick and not you, right?! lol
I was quite entertained by this ink!
Welcome to DU! :)
So, dumb whores who loves the hunk of meat in your pants, who seemed to be shallow with meaningless conversation and are useless as a spare.....more likely than not, are interested in your dick and not you, right?! lol
I was quite entertained by this ink!
Welcome to DU! :)
29th Jan 2013 7:00pm
well yeah, like i said it could be a monster of my own design. and its meant to be somewhat humorous. also kind of making fun of myself becuase i know better.
but im glad i can entertain you, thanks for reading
but im glad i can entertain you, thanks for reading
29th Jan 2013 7:38pm
The lovely thing about poetry is that it can be interpretted in many different ways. :)
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- Edited 29th Jan 2013 11:39pm
29th Jan 2013 11:32pm
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i guess u can say i 'nailed' this one... and i dont know about before hand but im a really good looking guy. i dont know if ive ever made it two or three times hanging out with anyone before having sex.
30th Jan 2013 8:14am
