Scarlet Oceans

very nice piece sweets!!!!

Welcome to the DU!!!

Sir Lancelott

Welcome to DUP!
Excellent piece,

'Scarlet oceans
bleeding out into crimson rivers.
Muffled sounds
Swirling darkness.
Tranquil silence
Anguish numbed'

^^ wonderful vocabulary.

Scribbler.

Thank you both for the warm welcomes, I look forward to reading many writes and posting more:)

"cease to feel
cease to
breathe"

Your words speak volumes and the imagery is beautiful.

A wonderful pen, welcome to DU. :)

Thank you ..I greatly appreciate the feedback:)

"scarlet oceans flowing into crimson rivers"
memorable line im sure will stick with me.

Great writing, loved this piece.
wish ya had more up, looking forward to seeing your future works.

Superb write, RL.

Really enjoyed the read, gotta say.

Please pen on, poet!

Thanks for sharing :-)


Cheers
Tidespotter

Ps. Is it about depression...or drugs?

Hope that's not too bold to ask... :-)

Yeah...and WILKOMMEN...have fun on this cool site!

Depression..bathtub suicide..Thanks for the comment. I'm happy you enjoyed it :)

I hope such gloom has passed for you. I can relate to the feeling this piece of art invokes - Death. I often fantasized about my mother and brother coming home to find me and a toaster fried in the bathtub full of high voltage water. The feeling of death fascinates me still, but it does not make me want to take my own life anymore.

This is a great poem. Each word was selected carefully and insinuates a good deal about your imagination through few words. I'm glad that other people see this too. :) Exaltation to a newcomer. Peace & love to you.

very well thought out and written well done :)

love the way you space the words makes them have a special savoir faire!