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Dream Weaver
By Lara D.
Last night in my dream
I had died
My body floating
Above the ground
Everything
Gray and hazy
Feeling of
Illusion and lost
My soul
Didn’t care
The body
Was dismantled
My death
Was the story
Of my delusional
Unrealistic life
I don’t know
What to believe
Is this the
Reality of life?
© 2013 Lara D.
Last night in my dream
I had died
My body floating
Above the ground
Everything
Gray and hazy
Feeling of
Illusion and lost
My soul
Didn’t care
The body
Was dismantled
My death
Was the story
Of my delusional
Unrealistic life
I don’t know
What to believe
Is this the
Reality of life?
© 2013 Lara D.
Published 28th Jan 2013
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Anonymous
28th Jan 2013 9:18am
You have a beautiful way of putting this into words.
Well done, L.
Love the form of the poem, too.
Please pen on!
Thanks for sharing ;-)
And welcome to this cool site...have fun!
Cheers
Tidespotter
Well done, L.
Love the form of the poem, too.
Please pen on!
Thanks for sharing ;-)
And welcome to this cool site...have fun!
Cheers
Tidespotter
28th Jan 2013 2:04pm
