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Frustration
Brushing snow from off me pathway
When the head came off the brush
I had to hurry before it all melted
So I fixed it in a helluva rush
Restarting brushing with vigour
I gave a great frustrated shout
Just when I’d got the head fixed on
The handle it came out! :-)
When the head came off the brush
I had to hurry before it all melted
So I fixed it in a helluva rush
Restarting brushing with vigour
I gave a great frustrated shout
Just when I’d got the head fixed on
The handle it came out! :-)
Published 26th Jan 2013
| Edited 27th Jan 2013
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Anonymous
27th Jan 2013 4:03am
Priceless! Love the way you make me laugh, Blocat!
27th Jan 2013 5:49am
27th Jan 2013 10:59am
28th Jan 2013 8:02pm
Tee-hee, I found your poem quite visually authentic, having just been through my own broom handle fiasco! Tomfoolery good fun, lol!
28th Jan 2013 8:56pm
Glad you enjoyed it Ravenwing and I hope you hsd a better result with yours :-)
