Half full (of empty)

Truly beautiful piece, the combination of words reads like an image that, once youve finsished reading it, continues in re reading it...

Ms. Queen of the lizards, a truly beautiful comment...couldnt be happier that it does that for ya..i thank ya kindlu for saying so

nice write lightbaron

strider

Thank you Strider

I'm liking this one LB, but....

I won't lie. Where did the other one (henpecking)go ?

Did I hurt your feelings ? I hope not. Cause I adored it :)

Haha..didn't know you commented on that one...i would love to hear your notes, because i'm sitting on that one... I like the idea alot of it, but feel it can be worded better.
For whatever reason, i kept trying to tie this one with that one, and felt it necessary to just cut this free..we'll see if it walks.
Thanks maggie

First -

"Henpecking" was funny, in an intelligent way. (yes.... that is rare. lol)

Secondly -

It was TRUE !

I was going to print it out, and hand it to my husband over supper.

Don't conjoin these. I would work on this one a bit. I think you have something here, but...

Henpecking stood on its own quite nicely in my opinion. :)

Ha..fair enough...maybe that bit of confidence, will let me, let it float...thanks again

Melancholy, and yet self deprecatingly humourous. I can relate. :) Very much enjoying your shorter introspective piece. Like this one very much.

Peace, Indie

Dig it...thank ya kindly indie

Talent with words.

Much appreciation to ya, my man...thanks

Awesome!. I'm guessing the moths were burned to death in the light?

Minor typo Fluorescence.

Great poem.

ehh you sly fox...much appreciation on the spotted typo...fixed.

what other suitable way is there for a moth to die?