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My Mistress
I love you
But what will take
For you to call me
Oder me to present myself
For me to receive a spanking

A spanking that will have me in tears
A spanking that will seem to never end
A spanking that will leave me blistered and bruised
A spanking that I will have no problem remembering
A spanking that will still sting for weeks to come

Will you still love me for asking, begging for this
To have me standing in front of you naked exposed
Nervous, trembling, anxious but burning from my anticipation
Wanting more and more
Tilting my bare swollen red bottom up
Never flexing my gluteal muscles
So each swat stinks so delightful more

Will you still respect me
When I am beginning to tear up
When tears are running down my cheeks
When I am begging for you to please, oh please stop
When you whisper in my ear that you have only just begun
Will you still respect me

After the last slap of the paddle, strap and cane
After you have taken me way past my limit
After you have broken me down
Will you comfort me
Hold me until I have stopped crying
Kiss me on my cheek
Tell me I took the spanking well

Will you smile back at me when I beg you to start all over again