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Squinted eyes
I look at you
through squinted eyes
An aura about you
That shines so bright
I'm used to my darkness
Not having sight
Be patient with me baby
While i adjust to your light
through squinted eyes
An aura about you
That shines so bright
I'm used to my darkness
Not having sight
Be patient with me baby
While i adjust to your light
Published 19th Jan 2013
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19th Jan 2013 10:13pm
20th Jan 2013 6:08pm
20th Jan 2013 00:40am
this is probly my favorite...short and sweet...rhyme scheme is always off the chain...love it!!
20th Jan 2013 4:11am
Like it NYX. I could agree it stands on its own. It also feels like it could just the beginning to something bigger...well in two ways. The beginning of a relationship. And the beginning to a series or longer form. Im curious about the aura, and your darkness. What comes next, or before?
Agreed -BlaccZacc, Im a fan of her rhyme schemes as well. Great job NYX!
Agreed -BlaccZacc, Im a fan of her rhyme schemes as well. Great job NYX!
20th Jan 2013 6:16pm
Thank you... I'm trying to figure it out too.. For some reason the only way I can express myself is through pen and paper, it's frustrating when i want to tell somebody something and It gets stuck ya know...grrr There will be more like this I'm sure :)
