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Her name, i forgot.
Flowers erupted out of her fingertips
as she stroked my sternum, timidly
my chest fractures
as she made it her garden
as she stroked my sternum, timidly
my chest fractures
as she made it her garden
Published 19th Jan 2013
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Anonymous
19th Jan 2013 8:15am
How beautiful, truly beautiful poetic image!
Anonymous
19th Jan 2013 8:46am
There's some great concepts to work with here, you've got a strong base and it's plain to me you know how to work with poetic techniques. Expand further, this has the potential to be a damn good piece in my eyes.
19th Jan 2013 1:55pm
this is beautiful...i just joined recently and yours is one of the first poems i read....it really is lovely.
20th Jan 2013 4:56pm
