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wondrous love
nothing here ever changes
my feelings remain the same
as you give your love to me
i shall give it back again
love is better than a drug
it forever makes me high
my love for you is endless
it merely intensifies
my feelings remain the same
as you give your love to me
i shall give it back again
love is better than a drug
it forever makes me high
my love for you is endless
it merely intensifies
Published 14th Jan 2013
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Anonymous
14th Jan 2013 4:30pm
Two perfect stanza's that rhyme ever so nicely. "...love is better than a drug..." I like that line plus the last stanza finishes the poem beautifully. I think this piece has a touch of the Hallmark card flavour about it. It's lovely, Faith! :)
Carlene
Carlene
16th Mar 2013 8:26pm
Somehow, I missed seeing your wonderful comments here. I wanted to thank you for them. Much appreciated, dear Carlene :)
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
16th Mar 2013 10:57pm
You're so welcome, Faith, & not a prob. Myself, I wonder sometimes have I missed any replies. I hope not! lol Thanks for the update, my friend! xoxo
Carlene
Carlene
14th Jan 2013 4:47pm
16th Mar 2013 8:27pm
Magdalena, I missed seeing your comments somehow but do thank you very much for the lovely compliment! :)
Faith
Faith
12th Jun 2024 9:28pm
I'm turning back the clock here...A beautiful piece of writing Faith. Nicely written.
13th Jun 2024 00:25am
