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An etirnity together.
With lips so soft,
how could one resist?
With how you touch,
how could one stop the butterflies?
With a hand so tender,
how could one keep from holding it?
With a body so trimmed,
how could one keep from cradling you?
With a voice so sensational,
how could one keep from smiling?
With a heart so pure,
how could anyone have let it drop?
With eyes so beautiful,
how could one look away?
With a love like yours,
I could need nothing else.
You listen while others turn their head.
You saw right through the act.
Straight to the pain and sarrow.
You put all the right pieces in all the right places.
You've filled the hole,
that had once caused me to sink.
You made me want to helieve in forever.
Forever and ever.
And an ertinity together. <3
how could one resist?
With how you touch,
how could one stop the butterflies?
With a hand so tender,
how could one keep from holding it?
With a body so trimmed,
how could one keep from cradling you?
With a voice so sensational,
how could one keep from smiling?
With a heart so pure,
how could anyone have let it drop?
With eyes so beautiful,
how could one look away?
With a love like yours,
I could need nothing else.
You listen while others turn their head.
You saw right through the act.
Straight to the pain and sarrow.
You put all the right pieces in all the right places.
You've filled the hole,
that had once caused me to sink.
You made me want to helieve in forever.
Forever and ever.
And an ertinity together. <3
Published 5th Aug 2010
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6th Aug 2010 1:54am
It's a bit saccharin sweet for my tastes. The repeatition seems predictable and contrived to me. Sorry.
10th Sep 2010 5:20pm
I liked it, I thought it was good. And I am going through this same thing at the moment. :D
