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lost thinker
a lost thinker
sitting on the tree
w. r. i. t . i. n . g poetry
sun falls to the sea
a melting beauty
clouds fluff around
birds provide the sound
it illuminates my mind
refreshes my soul like peeled lemon rind
i sit in glee and peacefulness
and absorb the moment's holiness
a lost thinker
sitting on the tree
sitting on the tree
w. r. i. t . i. n . g poetry
sun falls to the sea
a melting beauty
clouds fluff around
birds provide the sound
it illuminates my mind
refreshes my soul like peeled lemon rind
i sit in glee and peacefulness
and absorb the moment's holiness
a lost thinker
sitting on the tree
Published 5th Aug 2010
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5th Aug 2010 5:44pm
I'm not usually keen on rhyme, but I really like this piece...and I think also cause the rhyme scheme isn't so rigid, that it actually gives the words this really refreshing energetic feel which along with that line "refreshes my soul like peeled lemon rind" is great.
6th Aug 2010 6:25pm
thanks merda....
i dont mean to rhyme you know, it just comes naturally,
but i know what you mean by rigid...some people try to force the words out...anyways glad u liked it..
later then
-mar
