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I like that phrase 'brain stem'...reminded me of a flower being dead-headed. And that last line is just great in the context...darkly comical.

someone on da saw a pun i didnt see.. cutting through the brain stem.. but its the thought that counts.. kind of a pun idk.. yes a bit comical :D yeah these two poems were just an idea i had i wanted to write something gross.. theyre nothing great just an experiment.. kinda forced idk i was listening to some grindcore last night and wanted to get back into my harsher state of mind.. my recent stuff has been rather soft for a certain someone ;) you probably dont know her

Very, very, very dark comedy, so much so that it's pretty much just black. The line about sawing through the brain stem reminded of when I first watched Misery, and saw the scene where Kathy Bates breaks James Caan's ankles with a sledgehammer; it made me wince just as much, and will probably haunt me for as long.

speaking of sawing in the stephen king book she actually saws off his feet rather than breaking them in the movie.. so yeah makes even more sense that they remind you of each other.. i guess hollywood didnt want to take it to that level just yet.. now with movies like "saw" (and pun/synch up there? heh) they go all out.. it takes more and more to freak us out.. so many are jaded.. wait till the real chaos rains down.. ive seen it in dreams its more terrifying than imagining watching me during my meltdown which as my brother said to him thinking about it was worse than any horror film.. and unfortunately will probably haunt him for the rest of his life.. just the thought of it.. it would be fucked up if i had a video of that.. hmm

someone saw the pun in the last line before i did.. just felt like it belonged there.. so works on too levels.. glad you like it hun :D