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Spinning on Empty
In my veins, to the brain,
Spun to hell and back again.
Revealing this feeling is somehow repeating,
Same fears turn into tears over and over through out my years.
Same old nightmares and hopeless stares,
And I still think that no one cares.
Line after line,
Rhyme after rhyme,
I still can’t escape these thoughts in my mind.
Time after time,
I always seem to find.
It’s my own weakness which supports this tie that binds.
Written 1996
Spun to hell and back again.
Revealing this feeling is somehow repeating,
Same fears turn into tears over and over through out my years.
Same old nightmares and hopeless stares,
And I still think that no one cares.
Line after line,
Rhyme after rhyme,
I still can’t escape these thoughts in my mind.
Time after time,
I always seem to find.
It’s my own weakness which supports this tie that binds.
Written 1996
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Re: Spinning on Empty
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re: Re: Spinning on Empty
25th Jan 2013 00:02am
Re: Spinning on Empty
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2013 7:11am
Wow, cool title.
Love this one, C C.
Keep penning, well done!
Tidespotter
Love this one, C C.
Keep penning, well done!
Tidespotter

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re: Re: Spinning on Empty
25th Jan 2013 00:06am
Re: Spinning on Empty
23rd Jan 2013 7:14am
You've got a straight forward way of laying it all down on the paper, this is good, you've done well.
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re: Re: Spinning on Empty
25th Jan 2013 00:10am
Hard believe I wrote this 17 years ago ! Yikes ! Thanks for reading & commenting :)
Re: Spinning on Empty
25th Jan 2013 2:12pm
re: Re: Spinning on Empty
25th Jan 2013 9:15pm
Thanks ;) Glad you can relate ? Wait, no...Hopefully you can also relate with being clean ! Haahahaheeehee
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8th Feb 2015 9:22am
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Re: Spinning on Empty
13th Apr 2015 2:50am
Very good. A great way to express the feeling of addiction. I can also relate to this and the feelings of being clean.
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re: Re: Spinning on Empty
15th Apr 2015 2:43am
Thank you for the comment :) Glad you liked it. And also that you can relate with the much better feeling of being clean ;o