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You for Me, Me for You

Another day of bliss with you 
Lying in the fields, watching cars go by 
Our eyes flickered with stars dancing
Nothing is quite like you and me
Everyone sees the world is ours alone tonight 

With every waking hour with you 
It seems Earth just slips away
To live is to breath you 
Here we're perfect all alone tonight 

My life is enveloped by you 
You've made my heart run away 
So it will trade you for me, me for you 
Every light bows to your smile 
Love let live tonight 
Forever a memory, watching cars go by

(The poem is meant to be ironic. If you read each first letter of each line it will spell out "Alone with Myself")


Written by ViktorLaurel (Michael Garner)
Published | Edited 5th Aug 2010
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