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choice
the void was perfect
but orgasms are nice too
it's hard to choose
whether to die
and get 70 virgins
or die
and become entirely emptied
of everything
I've found myself
at a stalemate
but orgasms are nice too
it's hard to choose
whether to die
and get 70 virgins
or die
and become entirely emptied
of everything
I've found myself
at a stalemate
Published 28th Jul 2010
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28th Jul 2010 8:42am
Nathan I admire your sense of thinking in this context. Very sacredly scripted.
29th Jul 2010 00:04am
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28th Jul 2010 9:05pm
what's the best choice out of the two anyway..
i guess it's best to get 70 virgins while dying!
lol
i guess it's best to get 70 virgins while dying!
lol
29th Jul 2010 00:04am
haha its definietly a tough choice but who can resist fucking right haha
10th Aug 2010 8:43am
it's so interesting how you're basically choosing, not what's going to happen to you, but between a religion and not a religion...deciding what you can *believe* is going to happen to you knowing full well that you can't control it. damn, nathan, always with the thinking writes. although, i really don't know what i would pick either! need more lifetime to think about it i guess, unfortunately. haha
10th Aug 2010 9:05am
haha take your time :D well its not really a religion its a theory.. and after being a christian for 25 years and having to dechristianize myself for 2 years i will never believe fully in anyones theories not even my own.. they're all just guesses.. no one knows and perhaps will never know the real truth about everything.. its just my dream to go to the void.. as you can see i romanticize about it in quite a few poems.. but who knows what comes next.. maybe there are 70 virgins waiting for me up there if i believe this or that.. but if its an eternal heaven wouldn't you get bored of the same pussy all the time after a few years haha.. glad you like it cheers!
