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Forgetting You (Corey)
It's sad how I'm starting to forget you...
The sparkle in your deep brown eyes,
only a figment of my imagination.
Your goreous smirk is sadly slipping out of my mind.
Your snake bites brushing against my lips as you me kiss.
I miss that feeling.
Your warm hands exploring my body,
your touch suddenly slipping away.
The way you looked at me,
with so much love and lust.
The way you held me tight,
even though you knew I was fragile,
just like your heart.
Our unconditional love.
It's all slowly slipping out of my mind,
like I've gone mad.
Now,only a slowly fading memory.
The sparkle in your deep brown eyes,
only a figment of my imagination.
Your goreous smirk is sadly slipping out of my mind.
Your snake bites brushing against my lips as you me kiss.
I miss that feeling.
Your warm hands exploring my body,
your touch suddenly slipping away.
The way you looked at me,
with so much love and lust.
The way you held me tight,
even though you knew I was fragile,
just like your heart.
Our unconditional love.
It's all slowly slipping out of my mind,
like I've gone mad.
Now,only a slowly fading memory.
Published 31st Dec 2012
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31st Dec 2012 4:58pm
I can't tell whether you forgetting him is a good or bad thing. I'm assuming it is a bad thing since you obviously loved him a lot. Perhaps exploring that in your poem would improve it and make it easier to understand (just an idea).
I think the poem was really good. I can totally relate to it. It's sweet, but it isn't sappy. I like that about this poem.
Yours truly,
denythelove
I think the poem was really good. I can totally relate to it. It's sweet, but it isn't sappy. I like that about this poem.
Yours truly,
denythelove
