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Through My Eyes

The rain pounds slowly.
Whispering many sorrows.
To those who listen.

Written by Relentlesssmile628

Published 31st Dec 2012

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Re: Through My Eyes

31st Dec 2012 7:20am

Short poem but with a lot of depth!

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31st Dec 2012 7:21am

Thank you, I was in a place with a lot of depth when I wrote it.

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Re: Through My Eyes

Anonymous

31st Dec 2012 2:27pm

VERY beautiful image, true words!

31st Dec 2012 4:45pm

Thank you :)

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