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The Sound of Serenity
I had let go of any redemption I had once believed would save me
I had let go of all hope of justice, Justice that I once held so close
I tore open the veil, And when my faith was put upon the holy tree
I saw an angel that smelled of roses, And the sound of serenity sweetly arose
A beacon to guide me home, A treasure to hold me modest in my brightest of days
A purpose to guide me true, A vision to reveal the resolve pulsing in my veins
A path to roam, An embodiment of pleasure, The whispers of the sun’s rays
A day to no longer rue, An antidote on my deepest incisions, Released from my chains
I had let go of all hope of justice, Justice that I once held so close
I tore open the veil, And when my faith was put upon the holy tree
I saw an angel that smelled of roses, And the sound of serenity sweetly arose
A beacon to guide me home, A treasure to hold me modest in my brightest of days
A purpose to guide me true, A vision to reveal the resolve pulsing in my veins
A path to roam, An embodiment of pleasure, The whispers of the sun’s rays
A day to no longer rue, An antidote on my deepest incisions, Released from my chains
Published 29th Dec 2012
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29th Dec 2012 10:22pm
smelt jumped out at me when I read the last line of the first part, it made my brain happy, but apart from that I know, feel, love the power of your writing, great first line, it had me hook line and sinker'd until you released me from my chains. I'm so very glad this poem was my first reading today, the crazy jive party in my head has faded, replaced by the sound of serenity, 1 day, this day, my only day! vart@rt
