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transformed
moisture from your hole
inviting me inside
cum from my cock
releasing what I craved to
sweat from my chest
from the heat within
tears from my eyes
as I am overwhelmed
you have transformed me
even for that instant
I have become a feeling without form
I am beside myself
I am above myself
even if just for that instant
I am beyond myself
inviting me inside
cum from my cock
releasing what I craved to
sweat from my chest
from the heat within
tears from my eyes
as I am overwhelmed
you have transformed me
even for that instant
I have become a feeling without form
I am beside myself
I am above myself
even if just for that instant
I am beyond myself
Published 24th Jul 2010
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24th Jul 2010 1:18pm
I think it's great how you start this poem off quite physical, but by the end, just like the title suggests, it becomes something more than that, something beyond physical pleasure, which is illustrated just brilliantly in that last line. It's like you're past and beyond the confinements of the body- the best sort of transformation.
25th Jul 2010 1:55am
you'll see this theory more illustrate and thought through in my newest poem orgasm.. i'm glad you like it.. it really is about transcendence.. which happens to be inspired by the reply i made to the other poem you commented on today
