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Nightmare Cabin

one night while John was at camp,
he was exploring the grounds when
a bad storm came. Seeing that cabin
thirteen was unlocked and the closest,
he went inside. His consoler called
him and he gave a verbal response where
he was and said he would see his consoler
in the morning. Later that night John heard
a strange noise, as if someone was being hanged.
But, dismissed it. He thought, "I'm just hearing
things. It's just my imagination and the storm
and being in this cabin alone. Besides Angela let
 me carry her .45" Shortly after John Went to bed.
Around 4:45 in the morning John went to the restroom
feeling a little like someone else was there, but
dismissed the feeling. On his way back to bed,
John saw a glow from behind him and turned around
to see the cabin looking like a three dimensional
black and white cartoon sketch of the inside of the
cabin. A woman greyish in color was hanging from the
ceiling rafter chortling "I will make you pay for
accusing me of witch craft." John says, I'm not seeing
this. It's impossible," At that point a skull from
ceiling to floor tall wall to wall wide appeared against
the back wall. It said, I'll drive you crazy and make you
kill your friends. Then I'll kill you." John ran out of
the cabin and stopped in front of the mess hall where he
had seen a woman approaching him and he drew the pistol.
His consoler let him use.
He said,"You best tell me who you are before I destroy
your face with one .45 caliber hollow point going thru
your skull at approximately sixteen hundred feet per
second." The woman said, "John please lower the gun.
It's me Angela, and I know that gun is loaded." John
asked how she knew and Angela simply said, "The only
way the hammer goes back on that pistol is when a shell
is in the chamber." John told Angela what happened just
an hour before she found him. Angela Told him he was
lucky to escape cabin 13 alive and sane. When John asked
why, Angela said, "One other escaped that cursed place
and is now a permanent resident of Ridge Mont mental
institute. Five other people have stayed over night
there and were found dead three days later." the incident
was never spoken of again.
Written by mike1974 (Gothic Nightmare)
Published | Edited 11th Sep 2013
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