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The Dull Song For The Doll Boy
Lets get out of this place,
Lets get out of this cell.
We'll cut everyone off,
Make them ashamed of this hell.
We did what was right,
It was right cuz we did it.
We'll burn this town down,
With everyone still in it.
We'll cut out of this skin,
So we can finally breathe.
Live amongst ourselves,
In the stars we have weaved.
You could ring me to sleep,
'Cause my ears wont stop singing.
Our eyes keep on shining,
And our hearts keep on clinging.
Shut gun blow to the head,
Causes a dirty blood shower.
So kiss me in the rain,
While everyone cowers?
Lets get out of this cell.
We'll cut everyone off,
Make them ashamed of this hell.
We did what was right,
It was right cuz we did it.
We'll burn this town down,
With everyone still in it.
We'll cut out of this skin,
So we can finally breathe.
Live amongst ourselves,
In the stars we have weaved.
You could ring me to sleep,
'Cause my ears wont stop singing.
Our eyes keep on shining,
And our hearts keep on clinging.
Shut gun blow to the head,
Causes a dirty blood shower.
So kiss me in the rain,
While everyone cowers?
Published 22nd Jul 2010
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Anonymous
22nd Jul 2010 4:44am
We posted our poems at the exact same time. That means something. Or nothing.
The rhyme scheme/meter in your poem actually isn't too fucked up. Not bad.
Possibly you meant "shot" gun though? And I don't really understand the question mark at the end.
The rhyme scheme/meter in your poem actually isn't too fucked up. Not bad.
Possibly you meant "shot" gun though? And I don't really understand the question mark at the end.
