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The Creature Within
I feel something inside me
and it controls me inside and out.
I can feel the change in me
and the depression and anger has grown.
I don't know what it is or how it's happening
but i just wanna tear sumones fucking head off,
the power i feel inside of me is in my bones and soul.
I scare people so much more now
people quiver when they see me and i love it,
the creature within me has gave me everything
but i still somewhat feel the real me trying to tell
me that i need to get rid of the creature inside me.
The old me is saying that i've forgot who i am
i need to let go of the new me or i will be gone forever,
people will no longer talk to me and I will harm people
i dont want to hurt,
people i love will suffer because i didnt change
The creature is going to end you
and you don't even see it.
and it controls me inside and out.
I can feel the change in me
and the depression and anger has grown.
I don't know what it is or how it's happening
but i just wanna tear sumones fucking head off,
the power i feel inside of me is in my bones and soul.
I scare people so much more now
people quiver when they see me and i love it,
the creature within me has gave me everything
but i still somewhat feel the real me trying to tell
me that i need to get rid of the creature inside me.
The old me is saying that i've forgot who i am
i need to let go of the new me or i will be gone forever,
people will no longer talk to me and I will harm people
i dont want to hurt,
people i love will suffer because i didnt change
The creature is going to end you
and you don't even see it.
Published 21st Jul 2010
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25th Jul 2010 3:47am
Sometimes the best you can hope for is to just control the beast. It's hard I know I aint no bible thumper but I pray to the Big dude to save me from me on a daily basis. Hang in there and keep the poems coming.
3rd Aug 2010 10:36am
i definitely get where your coming from with this poem and i think its amazing work so keep the poems comin i hope it helps you to vent a little
