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Ecstasy
Yes
The word rolls from your lips
Tickles the pulse of my neck
Your hand trace the curve of my body
Stirring the fire into flames
Slowly removing fabric
The warmth from your hands mold me
Riding my mind into a storm
Your lips take me, feed my thirst
Yet draining me
The beat of your heart becomes in tune with mine
Balancing and increasing the tempo dramatically
Oh how the pleasure of the passion
Leaves on in a hopeless battle to say
Yes
Oh yes
Yes
Oh yes
Yes
Oh fuck yes
The word rolls from your lips
Tickles the pulse of my neck
Your hand trace the curve of my body
Stirring the fire into flames
Slowly removing fabric
The warmth from your hands mold me
Riding my mind into a storm
Your lips take me, feed my thirst
Yet draining me
The beat of your heart becomes in tune with mine
Balancing and increasing the tempo dramatically
Oh how the pleasure of the passion
Leaves on in a hopeless battle to say
Yes
Oh yes
Yes
Oh yes
Yes
Oh fuck yes
Published 18th Dec 2012
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18th Dec 2012 6:08am
Without being overly graphic you create such a serene feeling that is more like romance then erotica, until the end...we all can figure out what that is about!
Hope you like DU.
Hope you like DU.
18th Dec 2012 1:46pm
18th Dec 2012 4:17pm
Isn't this the way it is?! Most sensual - YES! I enjoyed this. Thank you.
Streaks :-)
Streaks :-)
12th Jan 2013 4:51pm
Oh fuck yes sweets great piece nicely written
Stir the fire into flames, HOT
welcome to DU
Stir the fire into flames, HOT
welcome to DU
15th Jan 2013 3:03am
Wow.......that just might make it a bit hard and a little wet ; ) A simply orgasmic write in just a few words.
