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mental stich
They lied to you as they inked numbers in your head
dragged down to the sleeping dead.
Broken apart
held down while they intoxicate your heart.
Sedated while they medicate your brain
and as you slowly go insane they break your soul of steel.
Dripped in acid.
with a tar black soul.
Frozen cold
in a mental stich.
dragged down to the sleeping dead.
Broken apart
held down while they intoxicate your heart.
Sedated while they medicate your brain
and as you slowly go insane they break your soul of steel.
Dripped in acid.
with a tar black soul.
Frozen cold
in a mental stich.
Published 16th Dec 2012
| Edited 21st May 2014
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18th Dec 2012 00:36am
I don't even know what to say--there isn't a specific line that I like best; they all work fantastically well together.
~The only thing, I think you may have meant "and" rather than "an" in the 6th line. (:
~The only thing, I think you may have meant "and" rather than "an" in the 6th line. (:
18th Dec 2012 4:51pm
Ha ha, your right, I messed up.
Sadly I can't fix it now.
this is my favorit poem.
Thank you very much.
Sadly I can't fix it now.
this is my favorit poem.
Thank you very much.
