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Devoted
Devoted to one who has no devotion to me in love to my knees its like i'm drowning in a sea of deception and lies but still dreading the end im lost in love and cant find my best friend afraid of facing defeat and failure i hold on to words and memeoires i savor though the presence of passion is no longer in your touch i crave to be held i need you so much i'm devoted to a body because the heart and soul are somewhere else how do i escape this prison only your heart can help
Published 13th Dec 2012
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16th Dec 2012 00:14am
Okay now this reminds me of the tales of heartbreak that come from Sade.
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16th Dec 2012 00:18am
16th Dec 2012 00:43am
That is okay they have only sold about 50 million cds/albums since their first composition in 1983. (laugh) Their most famous maybe "No Ordinary Love" from the movie Indecent Proposal. Their heartbreak songs include "Bullet Proof Soul", and "King Of Sorrow". Went to see them for my birthday last year---best concert I have ever been to. John Legend opened for them. Members of the band have recorded with Seal and Maxwell.
16th Dec 2012 1:11am
16th Dec 2012 3:44am
I like the style you use in your poetry, the continuous uninterrupted writing like a thought on paper. If you have the time check out my songs. Peace
16th Dec 2012 3:53am
