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My Advice
My advice.
When the bank calls
hang up
....
There's truth in writing
(sometimes)
and after tonight, it'll all change.
....
More advice,
keep your eye on
what really matters
....
the bottle
the pen
and the women.
....
And when the bank calls
hang up.
I love you
Published 11th Dec 2012
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11th Dec 2012 9:46pm
This is cryptic as hell, and yet...
There is something I find very fascinating about it.
Enjoyed reading this :)
There is something I find very fascinating about it.
Enjoyed reading this :)
11th Dec 2012 10:08pm
Was a series of drunken scribbles that were shorthanded during a long drinking session...
I found them in my pocket and typed them and kinda liked it.
I dig cryptic anyway :-)
I found them in my pocket and typed them and kinda liked it.
I dig cryptic anyway :-)
12th Dec 2012 00:11am
12th Dec 2012 8:24am
12th Dec 2012 8:52am
reminds me of when we used to play on the three word lines thread and write poems that way. i love the simple ending that seems so core in the way everything else swirls around it, that's the root under it all, with "and the women" kind of anchoring it, foreshadowing. it carries its own weight.
whether by accident or no, you've come up with something preeeetty cool, if you were to ask me. [:
whether by accident or no, you've come up with something preeeetty cool, if you were to ask me. [:
12th Dec 2012 9:29am
12th Dec 2012 7:59pm
