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Let it Snow
The snow and wind work together
at pulling my hood off, then stinging my face.
The thought of home is forced from reality
but my legs stagger regardless.
It's always time for a song
whether you're born, dying or dead
but winter brings music in mocking tones,
especially when the ground is thick with ice
and every careful step looks writhed.
Let It Snow, laments from the radio.
It could only be sung buy a rich man
who's lost count of his beads of sweat
and can't squeeze enough ice
into his cocktails. Parched yet drowned.
I take my wet jacket off while Lucy
licks my boots to taste outside
because even she knows
since the age of prey and predator
the dark has never been, just the dark -
then the smell of fried mushrooms and steak
fans warmth from nostril to fingertip
as the radio still plays the unforgotten.
I'm warm; steaming. Sprawled and fat.
The dogs and children lay tame and peaceful
and for now that stiff bastard got it right.
Let it snow.
Let it grind these streets to their knees.
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Re: Let it Snow
Anonymous
9th Dec 2012 9:33am
It could only be sung buy a rich man
by a rich man?
Frankly this poem just makes me feel seasonal and melancholy. And that I certainly need to come to your house for breakfast.
A very effective write that envokes all the right emotions. Thank you for the read.
by a rich man?
Frankly this poem just makes me feel seasonal and melancholy. And that I certainly need to come to your house for breakfast.
A very effective write that envokes all the right emotions. Thank you for the read.
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re: Re: Let it Snow
9th Dec 2012 9:49am
Yes, a rich man. Trying to portray Vaughn Monroe in California with the only problem in the world for him to have, is the heat.
Yeah come for breakfast. You bring cake.
Thanks for the kind feedback, Missy.
Yeah come for breakfast. You bring cake.
Thanks for the kind feedback, Missy.
Re: Let it Snow
9th Dec 2012 9:46am
very cool mr Al.
highly enjoyable and relaxing read
oh and I'm with missy..
what's for breaky..
rock on..
highly enjoyable and relaxing read
oh and I'm with missy..
what's for breaky..
rock on..
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re: Re: Let it Snow
9th Dec 2012 9:58am
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9th Dec 2012 10:08am
Re: Let it Snow
tis most 'interesting' to read a poem like this in a clime that will have no freeze, yet the populace is dressing 'as if' bittercold..."oh, it's so cold. Aren't you cold?" as i'm the onliest coatless, indeed shirtless, being on the beach, & 'playing' in the rip-tide as a 'workout'
no less.
it's so ridiculously relative & subjective, yet 'we' consider whatever 'we think/feel' as some judgement unto an absolute reality.
"& so what, wise guy? - fuck you to not participate in this cold, as It Is Cold, this cold" -
ah, my dearest dearprecious digressions!
& a 5'star ratting again for Sir Alp & thank ye for 'putting it out' for thee 'I's to see...on
whatever i'magined 'level' me eye may be
no less.
it's so ridiculously relative & subjective, yet 'we' consider whatever 'we think/feel' as some judgement unto an absolute reality.
"& so what, wise guy? - fuck you to not participate in this cold, as It Is Cold, this cold" -
ah, my dearest dearprecious digressions!
& a 5'star ratting again for Sir Alp & thank ye for 'putting it out' for thee 'I's to see...on
whatever i'magined 'level' me eye may be
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re: Re: Let it Snow
11th Dec 2012 8:48am
I was going to suggest(before I saw the poem) that you should make a poem.
People are seasonal wherever they are, probably even the equatorial-ians.
People are seasonal wherever they are, probably even the equatorial-ians.
Re: Let it Snow
9th Dec 2012 6:52pm
It could only be sung buy a rich man
who's lost count of his beads of sweat
and can't squeeze enough ice
into his cocktails. Parched yet drowned.
.. Where the hell did you come from.. I wanna go there and lick the stains from the ground. damn! I wanna swallow you whole. =)
who's lost count of his beads of sweat
and can't squeeze enough ice
into his cocktails. Parched yet drowned.
.. Where the hell did you come from.. I wanna go there and lick the stains from the ground. damn! I wanna swallow you whole. =)
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re: Re: Let it Snow
Just a whiff of them stains would kill you, woman.
As always, thanks for your slippy stain, Devilish.
As always, thanks for your slippy stain, Devilish.
Re: Let it Snow
9th Dec 2012 8:15pm
for me pretty perfect my man. Certainly seasonal but with so many observations that I have made exactly. But you got it down, briskly and clearly. Enough of the nice language to shine a bit, but plainly laid out..what this didn't have In way of the cryptic stuff you often lay down, it doesn't lose anything depth. Good stuff
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re: Re: Let it Snow
11th Dec 2012 8:53am
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9th Dec 2012 8:39pm
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11th Dec 2012 8:54am
Re: Let it Snow
I very much enjoyed this piece, the hint of cynicism flavored it nicely, and it had me thinking of those nights driving home, the headlights setting the snow to a fine glitter, evergreens laden with snow lining the road. The windows are foggy, and the dog puts dripping nose-prints on the cold glass.
Thanks for sharing this poem.
AlwaysCaliban
Thanks for sharing this poem.
AlwaysCaliban
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re: Re: Let it Snow
12th Jan 2013 9:33am
I thought that season was behind me, but there's snow on the ground again here.
What it evoked in you was pretty much its goal. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
What it evoked in you was pretty much its goal. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.