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My rain
my rain is not one that is to be taken lightly
It chains the beast within my pale beauty
Echoed through the valleys of my mind
And written on the scars of my battles
My rain is one of acid and ash
Melting and burning my skin every where it falls
Ironically this rain is un seen and unheard
Unless you follow me through wicked paths
Unless you can brave the disfuncational mind that finds pleasure in being raped ,beaten , controled and tamed
My rain my chains for the beast
My acid for my flesh
My tears that run the paths of my face
It chains the beast within my pale beauty
Echoed through the valleys of my mind
And written on the scars of my battles
My rain is one of acid and ash
Melting and burning my skin every where it falls
Ironically this rain is un seen and unheard
Unless you follow me through wicked paths
Unless you can brave the disfuncational mind that finds pleasure in being raped ,beaten , controled and tamed
My rain my chains for the beast
My acid for my flesh
My tears that run the paths of my face
Published 8th Dec 2012
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11th Jan 2013 5:04am
This is powerful stuff in such a small amount of words. "
my rain is not one that is to be taken lightly
It chains the beast within my pale beauty" I love this part of the poem.
Is this true of you "the disfuncational mind that finds pleasure in being raped ,beaten , controled and tamed"?
my rain is not one that is to be taken lightly
It chains the beast within my pale beauty" I love this part of the poem.
Is this true of you "the disfuncational mind that finds pleasure in being raped ,beaten , controled and tamed"?
Pretty much ._.i mean I put that in there I wouldn't have if it wasn't the truth
11th Jan 2013 5:17am
O.O I asked because some other poet have a thing of adding fictional content to their writing. You're an interesting one indeed masquerade-pen.
11th Jan 2013 5:19am
The only fictional thing I write is love I've never felt it that and the rape poem I've never went through it but I have a pretty good concept of it .
11th Jan 2013 5:25am
Ah okay. That makes sense. I've read your profile and you write about a wide spectrum of things. That's pretty cool. You must be really openminded
11th Jan 2013 5:29am
Pretty much I don't care who you are what your religious birds are or what your opinion is about anything as long as its not harming me in any way shape or form if being thrown up in my face I'm good
11th Jan 2013 5:33am
Sounds like a pretty straightforward and chill approach of things to me.
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