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too private to post
she sent me murder
a psychopath of a poem
in a message entitled
"too private to post"
a written confession
motive
same as
collapsed mass
we
she explained
are accessories
guilty
only as much as magnets
are of pull
art
she assures me
can be severe
with its liberties in love
but
is much more dangerous
ignored
these are the times secrets
are most honest
and i'll obey
the only mode of honor
amongst outlaws
silence
I'll die, denying
that poetry even exists
a psychopath of a poem
in a message entitled
"too private to post"
a written confession
motive
same as
collapsed mass
we
she explained
are accessories
guilty
only as much as magnets
are of pull
art
she assures me
can be severe
with its liberties in love
but
is much more dangerous
ignored
these are the times secrets
are most honest
and i'll obey
the only mode of honor
amongst outlaws
silence
I'll die, denying
that poetry even exists
Published 6th Dec 2012
| Edited 30th Jun 2014
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6th Dec 2012 8:37pm
You require time for it all to sink in. So... That is what I am going to do. But until then ?
Trust me... I am liking this :)
Trust me... I am liking this :)
6th Dec 2012 9:16pm
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6th Dec 2012 9:30pm
"Whether or not you write well, write bravely" - pfft. Keeping it all to PM's. Get it out, already! haha.
On a poetical note, I really liked this. I like the fluid like quality to the read. A proper train of thought. Thank you for the read.
On a poetical note, I really liked this. I like the fluid like quality to the read. A proper train of thought. Thank you for the read.
6th Dec 2012 9:41pm
Ha..yup indeed.. Luckily i'm tough or stupid enough to be brave..can't fault the politics of emotions though
Thank you for reading Missy, and your kind words
Thank you for reading Missy, and your kind words
6th Dec 2012 10:10pm
Haha. She hm?
Definitely got the mystery going on. Good philosophical notes here:
the only mode of honor
amongst outlaws
silence
and the last two lines were cleverly laid too. One thing is evident for you though, and that is nothing's too private to post, and I'm happy about that.
Definitely got the mystery going on. Good philosophical notes here:
the only mode of honor
amongst outlaws
silence
and the last two lines were cleverly laid too. One thing is evident for you though, and that is nothing's too private to post, and I'm happy about that.
Thanks mr.a
Yeah the disguised privacy, half reveal thing was an interesting thought for me
Yeah the disguised privacy, half reveal thing was an interesting thought for me
6th Dec 2012 10:20pm
Nice!!! I enjoyed it lightbaron... Your thoughts are penned well... Thank you for sharing
7th Dec 2012 1:29am
7th Dec 2012 00:01am
"the only mode of honor
amongst outlaws
silence"
I think that is the part that resonates with me the most. Grew up with my fair (and not so fair) share of outlaws, and that is their code, silence. "Mind your business" is what they would say. I love how you equated this with poetry. ( And I thought I was the only one that has these off thoughts. lol I equated poetry to murder in " Deconstructure " )
Lovely piece, and the image is dead on :)
amongst outlaws
silence"
I think that is the part that resonates with me the most. Grew up with my fair (and not so fair) share of outlaws, and that is their code, silence. "Mind your business" is what they would say. I love how you equated this with poetry. ( And I thought I was the only one that has these off thoughts. lol I equated poetry to murder in " Deconstructure " )
Lovely piece, and the image is dead on :)
7th Dec 2012 1:32am
Ms. maggie, a pleasure to see ya again. You seem to be quite a bright addition to our lil community
Glad that resonated w you.
I am certainly a sucker for them odd proud points of the outliers of law
Glad that resonated w you.
I am certainly a sucker for them odd proud points of the outliers of law
