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chew up the mushroom of hiroshima
see if you trip balls
maybe you'll see jesus
or become a god
or have a vision of WWIII
and see how it all ends
if I don't take us all out first
see if you trip balls
maybe you'll see jesus
or become a god
or have a vision of WWIII
and see how it all ends
if I don't take us all out first
Published 2nd Jul 2010
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Anonymous
2nd Jul 2010 11:52pm
Another brief but surreal poem which deals with ultimate destruction in a disturbingly objective way. I adore the first line.
3rd Jul 2010 1:57pm
yeah that first line really does do a good job of setting up the piece.. even by itself it's surreal and intriguing if i may pull my own chain as it were.. as always jack thanks for the kind and observant words
3rd Jul 2010 1:58pm
as for ultimate destruction another favorite theme as is sex suicide and death as im sure youve caught onto by now :D
