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the pain
im waiting on someone i havent even meet yet;
a girls love is all i need to be complet;
all i want befor i die is to feel our lips meet;
when i do so will the roses stay red and violets still stay blue i will forever love her from the beautiful fray of hair above her and the silver lining growing ever so much brighter with each smile she makes her beauty will carry from her head all the way to her beautiful high heel shoes;
i will guied her till our lips meet once again in the heavens above and so we will live happy ever after."
and then i woke with feeling chest pains and a head ack."
a girls love is all i need to be complet;
all i want befor i die is to feel our lips meet;
when i do so will the roses stay red and violets still stay blue i will forever love her from the beautiful fray of hair above her and the silver lining growing ever so much brighter with each smile she makes her beauty will carry from her head all the way to her beautiful high heel shoes;
i will guied her till our lips meet once again in the heavens above and so we will live happy ever after."
and then i woke with feeling chest pains and a head ack."
Published 1st Dec 2012
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9th Dec 2012 3:57pm
I like it Josh, I think you should defiantly keep putting them up! N if I'm gonna be completely straight with you, maybe work on your flow just a little. But it really is a great poem. While reading it I can feel the longing you're speaking about.
11th Dec 2012 5:52am
