destiny

A strange poem, much more entrenched in the subconscious than your previous work; more surreal and perverse. I love the first two lines, and the final one in brackets (I've always liked that latter technique of yours).

yeah it is rather a strange and surreal poem.. sometimes i write them and post them without a second though then i go back and go wtf was i thinking when i wrote that one.. lol glad you like it.. and yeah the parenthesis thing i do i like too.. like an afterthought but still necessary..

a strange poem indeed!  why the title destiny?

destiny and inevitability were kinda written to go together.. in a way.. destiny because we have no soul.. our destiny is to rot in the ground.. become ash again.. so it doesn't matter how depraved you are

Didn't you say you were listening to gaza or something when you wrote this? You can tell...it's got a great morbid twist to it, just like the lyrics you showed me of theirs. I remember you said you hoped to write as well or better than that sometime: you did that a long time ago, and this one just shows that, I think. Bizarre and dark: it's like something from the house of horrors :]

yeah i believe i was listening to bird eater (so same lyricist as gaza) thank you so much for saying i've gotten to that level.. bizarre and dark.. most definitely.. just the way i like it :D