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The Fog
1.
Holding her lipstick
motionless in her right
hand, she admired the
way his muscles laid
across his shoulders.
In the shower he set
the dial as hot as he
could stand it. He took
the soap, building a lather
with his hands, spread it
over his entire faultless
body. Then, reaching for
a towel, he watched her as
she put on her earrings.
Her hair was smooth, roundly
tucked-in just above her
shoulders. Never a hair out
of place, Above her breastbone
was a coral cameo.
2.
The sunlight was split
in two. Above the fog-
ceiling it was a beautiful
day. Beneath/inside the
light was like putty. A
white gloom pressed against
the day. The air was chilly.
The slightest sound seemed to
ring in it.
3.
For him (read her) the morning
glowed. The fog seemed to
capture the light, made it
opalescent. Everything was
silent, even though she (read
he) knew the way by heart.
The fog swarmed, parted like
smoke in a dream. The entire
whole garden was over-ready
to burst into flower.
4.
The dense fog blanketed
the entire neighborhood.
The fog, like a gray
churning sea, was broken
here and there by the bowers
of trees. While their red
BMW seemed to float, sail
idly on the white void of
the driveway like a disabled
ship. Not a light was burning
in either of them.
Holding her lipstick
motionless in her right
hand, she admired the
way his muscles laid
across his shoulders.
In the shower he set
the dial as hot as he
could stand it. He took
the soap, building a lather
with his hands, spread it
over his entire faultless
body. Then, reaching for
a towel, he watched her as
she put on her earrings.
Her hair was smooth, roundly
tucked-in just above her
shoulders. Never a hair out
of place, Above her breastbone
was a coral cameo.
2.
The sunlight was split
in two. Above the fog-
ceiling it was a beautiful
day. Beneath/inside the
light was like putty. A
white gloom pressed against
the day. The air was chilly.
The slightest sound seemed to
ring in it.
3.
For him (read her) the morning
glowed. The fog seemed to
capture the light, made it
opalescent. Everything was
silent, even though she (read
he) knew the way by heart.
The fog swarmed, parted like
smoke in a dream. The entire
whole garden was over-ready
to burst into flower.
4.
The dense fog blanketed
the entire neighborhood.
The fog, like a gray
churning sea, was broken
here and there by the bowers
of trees. While their red
BMW seemed to float, sail
idly on the white void of
the driveway like a disabled
ship. Not a light was burning
in either of them.
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