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Who Is Broken
Hand me a man
all cracked and broken;
I will tear him open
seeking the soul,
seeking to solve,
knowing nothing
but the need to be close.
I cannot mend the mess of men.
I am not great.
For all that I am,
I am lonely.
Give me a messy man
and let him mend me
all cracked and broken;
I will tear him open
seeking the soul,
seeking to solve,
knowing nothing
but the need to be close.
I cannot mend the mess of men.
I am not great.
For all that I am,
I am lonely.
Give me a messy man
and let him mend me
Published 24th Jun 2010
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26th Apr 2012 2:05pm
I am broken
I served in Afghanistan. I've had more than my fair share of breaking.
I served in Afghanistan. I've had more than my fair share of breaking.
23rd Aug 2013 5:54am
I am sorry I never saw this comment back when you made it.
And too, to hear you have served and suffered. Some things are beyond repair, and I can't even imagine the after effects of something like that, but I hope there is some joy and betterment in your life today?
And too, to hear you have served and suffered. Some things are beyond repair, and I can't even imagine the after effects of something like that, but I hope there is some joy and betterment in your life today?
