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Anonymous
22nd Nov 2012 7:15pm
Very original haiku there!
Amazing what you can do with so little lines!
Amazing what you can do with so little lines!
22nd Nov 2012 7:20pm
Boy, that was quick. Thank you very much. I read that haikus can be funny as well as serious, so I decided to try my hand a haiku humor.
Anonymous
22nd Nov 2012 7:51pm
Well,Cj, since Ive added you to my poets I can see when you write a new poem......smile.
Yes, your humor flew over, I saw how much the ducks were making an effort in ducking....lol
Yes, your humor flew over, I saw how much the ducks were making an effort in ducking....lol
22nd Nov 2012 8:45pm
22nd Nov 2012 7:17pm
22nd Nov 2012 7:21pm
I wanted the ducks to bite the hunter on the ass, but I couldn't make it work. I'm glad you liked it and thank you for reading.
