Quicksilver

Well done Ataki...sadness felt!

Strider

Thanks, Strider.

I filed it under "Anger," but you're right, it's more about sadness.

Well written, Ataki. I love how the words capture the essence of the relationship perfectly.

Thank you for reading, Scribbler.

very good write there is much sadness in your words.

cheers

marcus

Thanks, Marcus, appreciate it.

Atakti. I too felt the sadness. well done.x karen

Thanks for the read and comment, Karen.

Someone told me once anger was a secondary emotion ... perhaps sadness is the primary? Well done Atakti! Mark

Thanks, Mark, I think you're right.

I agree, sadness but with an underlying feel of being one step behind followed by regret for a moment being missed. Very nice

Thanks for your input, cj.  Spot on analysis.

lovely

Fantastic write, amazing how you shift between one layer of emotion and the other!
Greatly enjoyed this poem

I didn't notice I did that.. Thanks for noticing, Mourganna. :)