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Taking The Hits

Feelings hurt, bruises appear on fragile skin.
Silent cries fill the air as a rough hand strikes.
Falling to the ground he quickly takes advantage.
He hits her and hits her non-stop.
She's a mess on the floor begging him to stop.
His eyes filled with hatered and evil.

He screams at her telling her she's useless,not important
and no one cares for her.
She just stares up at him with wet blue eyes and a bruised
filled face.
Laying there taking the hits, because she knows she can't
face him.
Letting him take advantage of her and walk all over her like
she's shit.

He hits her again

She just keeps to herself as he's finishing up with the
screaming and hitting.
He walks away leaving her there to suffer.
She curls up into a ball as she cries softly.
Big dark circles where his fist met her skin appears.
Laying there she thinks to herself why she takes this abuse.
Written by hannahagadorn (HippieHannah)
Published | Edited 14th Nov 2012
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