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Death & Pain
Freak and Monster is all I hear
Screaming and yelling in my ear.
Tears and blood cover my face
I'm broken just like a porcelain vase.
There is no cure for this pain
It just keeps coming like the rain.
I scream and shout for those to hear
But that just brings my death near.
I grab the knife from the floor
There is no pain anymore.
I took out all the pain you see
By cutting every part of me.
No more words can hurt me now
Because I made my final vow.
Here it is; now you'll see
Just take my life away from me.
Screaming and yelling in my ear.
Tears and blood cover my face
I'm broken just like a porcelain vase.
There is no cure for this pain
It just keeps coming like the rain.
I scream and shout for those to hear
But that just brings my death near.
I grab the knife from the floor
There is no pain anymore.
I took out all the pain you see
By cutting every part of me.
No more words can hurt me now
Because I made my final vow.
Here it is; now you'll see
Just take my life away from me.
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I know how u feel
13th Jun 2010 4:10pm
re: I know how u feel
13th Jun 2010 8:14pm
i have felt it
14th Jun 2010 6:05am
re: i have felt it
14th Jun 2010 1:09pm
My past
14th Jun 2010 10:41pm
re: My past
14th Jun 2010 10:52pm
ya i will be in 10th this year and i'm already getting crap during summer skool it suxs
damn
16th Jun 2010 3:53am
i fill da same way & im only in job corp...but this is a grate poem i love it...
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24th Jun 2010 12:06pm
i liked the poem though the one thing i got fed up with is the rhyming.
try not to use so much rhyming in your poems. i don't say that rhyming is not good just try and reduce it
try not to use so much rhyming in your poems. i don't say that rhyming is not good just try and reduce it
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24th Jun 2010 10:36pm
enjoyable
25th Dec 2010 8:33pm