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darling
She says "darling"
with a polished ochre
that makes me want to sharpen my knife,
while thanking a world;
kind enough
to have me.
with a polished ochre
that makes me want to sharpen my knife,
while thanking a world;
kind enough
to have me.
Published 12th Nov 2012
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12th Nov 2012 6:43am
This beautifully sweet and dark, so much between the lines, that I can read. Very much enjoyed this Light Baron :]
-Eve-
-Eve-
12th Nov 2012 7:00am
Awesome...so glad for your comment eve. I have two ambitious drafts started on the same theme, but perhaps it is the ethanol courage that made me plop this down and stick w it.going to work back into tlhe others but really hoped this had as much as I thought it did...thank ya much on your take
Anonymous
12th Nov 2012 1:45pm
You got the point across in so few words, lightbaron.
Strider
Strider
12th Nov 2012 2:45pm
