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Feel It Deep
Hey you feel that
You feel it so deep
Hey you like that
The feeling you get when you rape me
Push me up against the wall
I can't wait till I can see you fall
You like your dick being wet
I wish we would have never met
Kill me as you fill me
Rape me as you break me
I cry and writhe
Now I'll say goodbye.
Your playing is over
My body is gold
Now take this I will be Avenged Sevenfold <3
Leave this place now
I am not gonna bow
Now it's my turn to have some fun
So turn around and run
You feel it so deep
Hey you like that
The feeling you get when you rape me
Push me up against the wall
I can't wait till I can see you fall
You like your dick being wet
I wish we would have never met
Kill me as you fill me
Rape me as you break me
I cry and writhe
Now I'll say goodbye.
Your playing is over
My body is gold
Now take this I will be Avenged Sevenfold <3
Leave this place now
I am not gonna bow
Now it's my turn to have some fun
So turn around and run
Published 7th Nov 2012
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7th Nov 2012 5:37pm
Beautifully written and tragically told. wow. hello there you . welcome to DU.. if you eva need anything i'm around.
7th Nov 2012 5:45pm
7th Nov 2012 6:02pm
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8th Nov 2012 2:22pm
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13th Nov 2012 8:49pm
Wow I can tell th came from a verry deep and painful place. It also kibda seems like it could be metal lyrics. Im glad you have a positive outlet for your pain.
14th Nov 2012 1:27pm
28th Nov 2012 7:22pm
30th Jan 2013 3:02am
"Now it's my turn to have some fun, So turn around and run"...Haha, something about these lines are both funny and sexy..
