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Warm and inert I lie motionless
Swaddled in acrid smoke
Head lolls to and fro
Eyes flicker
Mind lost
must engage limbs
pungent odour sedates me
Warm and inert I die motionless
Swaddled in acrid smoke
Head lolls to and fro
Eyes flicker
Mind lost
must engage limbs
pungent odour sedates me
Warm and inert I die motionless
Published 29th Aug 2009
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29th Aug 2009 8:09pm
1st Sep 2009 4:03pm
I like the fact that you start and finsih your poem with the use of repetition. Very nice :)
13th Dec 2012 1:56am
