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No
Fuck you!
I will not say, "no".
You will never make me go.
Answer isn't, "I said so!"
Love me Love me
please don't go
Love me Love me
please don't go
Although we will never part,
you have eaten out my heart
I will never turn away,
you can have me every day!
I will never say goodbye
even when you make me cry
make me laugh and moan and scream
make me love you when your mean,
make me hurt you like you do
make me kneel down to you
make me never let you go
make me
make me please say "no".
I will not say, "no".
You will never make me go.
Answer isn't, "I said so!"
Love me Love me
please don't go
Love me Love me
please don't go
Although we will never part,
you have eaten out my heart
I will never turn away,
you can have me every day!
I will never say goodbye
even when you make me cry
make me laugh and moan and scream
make me love you when your mean,
make me hurt you like you do
make me kneel down to you
make me never let you go
make me
make me please say "no".
Published 4th Jun 2010
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14th Jul 2010 3:20am
4th Feb 2012 1:45am
cool concept, nice outline. the flow is choppy. but only cause of your format. breaking the phrases down according to tempo will pull a reader thru your flow. as is it goes in and out of fast n slow enough to take away from the power of your message. great rhyme technique!
