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Don't Get Caugh!
To Perve,
A desired game we all deserve
First, sit and sip your coffee hot
Eyes up scanning, aware their not!
Watch them walk by, hitch up their pants
Sneaking in another glance
Watching, as cake falls from your fork
Glance again, dare to be caught!
Enjoy the game, share with a friend
Some so hot you go round the bend
Hide behind your cake as you throw an eye
Place your fork to mouth release a sigh
Think naughty thoughts and crave in turn
Those sexy bods and bums to burn
Know your limit yet dare to live
To perve again, the perfect sin.
A desired game we all deserve
First, sit and sip your coffee hot
Eyes up scanning, aware their not!
Watch them walk by, hitch up their pants
Sneaking in another glance
Watching, as cake falls from your fork
Glance again, dare to be caught!
Enjoy the game, share with a friend
Some so hot you go round the bend
Hide behind your cake as you throw an eye
Place your fork to mouth release a sigh
Think naughty thoughts and crave in turn
Those sexy bods and bums to burn
Know your limit yet dare to live
To perve again, the perfect sin.
Published 29th Aug 2009
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31st Aug 2009 2:45am
hey - great work, i think this is a great poem, you've got some brilliant themes going on there, i love the idea of the perving as a theme, you've done it really well. have you thought about maybe breaking up the rhyming technique? i'm sure you could really add to the poem by using line breaks to enhance the feel of perving, etc. good luck, and thanks for making me smile!! x
31st Aug 2009 8:54pm
Thanks for that, the rhyming is just a phase I'm going through at the moment, my style changes constantly, depending how I'm feeling at the time. I'm sure it'll change eventually..my poems just snap into my head, really it's my brains choice, I'm just the hands that type them.
1st Sep 2009 5:41am
1st Sep 2009 6:08am
WOW we have so much in common, I to work in the same field, that and I come from an extreamly long line of perverts, dad and I sit in the shops every saturday, we drink coffee and watch..it's nice and even a little hilarious!
